kinda don't like the melody but the beat and timing are perfect, could change some pace or try experimenting with some stuff

Try:
-making stuff more atmospheric
-adding more effects [ personally like using large hall ]
-don't make things repetitive
-always concentrate on one thing first then move on because it seemed to me that u were going for like lofi plus dubstep

that's all for now, Good luck with ur future project

really gud . no i mean its really good, but sometimes the Japanese voice doesn't really match up, that's why its a 4 and a half stars really good notes tho ;)

really good!